I liked the overall visuals, very nicely done with those.
Titles at the start and end were a bit too long, tho of course guild members deserve their recognition And while the start could be a bit shorter, it wasn’t really too long and didn’t feel like it was going on “forever”.
About the music, and this is of course completely subjective… that second one had too much cyberpunk/Bladerunner vibes in my opinion and I wished it was something more fitting for WoW fantasy world. But that’s just my opinion, so don’t take that as a negative feedback
The video had a bit of story going on and it was edited to keep the pace nicely going, which is a plus. And like I said, the visuals were pleasing (WoW can use a bit of tweaking in colors/lights, so editing those made the video better).
So only “negatives” (just my subjective opinion) were that second music clip and perhaps the pace of titles, which wasn’t all that bad really.
I’d say it was good watch