Pet peeves: The return (Part 8)

yknow i kinda get that. on no level would i even dare compare myself to tolkien but genuinely it is so much easier to describe nature in detail than it is clothing. if i have to when writing something i freeze up

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Since I have written my story where depending on who is the main character for the chapter, its written from their perspective (whether that’s the contractionless vampire or the nonbinary mortal), I have just started describing people they’d find attractive as, you know, attractive and mostly leaving person descriptions at that.

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my partner is moving in tomorrow! i need to tidy!! aaaaaaa!!!

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Congratulations on this!

When writing my Tolkien fanfic, I keep second-guessing myself. I keep trying to imagine how Tolkien would write any given scene if it was him writing it. Am I putting too much detail into this description? Too little? Is this faithful to Tolkien? And then I’d inevitably eat myself for failing to live up to him, which is of course pointless and self-sabotaging. I know I’m nowhere near his level of writing skill and knowledge of literature, but it shouldn’t dissuade me from writing anyway.

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Deployed on a “Destroy Command Bunkers” mission with a Spear and completely carried the team.

I killed all three bunkers (two of which at range, with the Spear, one with a Walking Barrage) and solo destroyed four gunship fabs. 0 deaths.

The rest of the team did uh…a few bases? And a communications thingy? And they took up all the reinforcements. Don’t know how they died so much.

Some days I play and think yeah, actually I am good at video games.

10 minutes tidying, 60 minutes of gaming as a reward. Perfectly balanced.

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Its easy for me to say but it’s worth remembering two things!

One, Tolkien himself originally didn’t even think his story was very good. He wrote primarily for himself. A point of minor conflict with him and C.S Lewis who was his friend was that he felt at one point that Lewis was way too quick to publish and try to sell his works. Where he himself didn’t even considering publishing it until he got gently pressured to do a reading of his writing to another friend who tried to persuade him that it was actually good.

Secondly, and most importantly! The biggest thing is your own creativity and enjoyment! It matters what you think yourself :smiley:

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writing and my characters became a lot more fun when i stopped doing them for others and started doing it for myself

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https://i.pinimg.com/originals/0f/75/ca/0f75cad56cbae1880bd0424f437e0a48.jpg

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Elf SUPREMACY!!!

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Whoa, whoa, easy there, Thingol!

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It’s not all it’s cracked up to be.

Much as I’m enjoying tww, I’m getting increasingly irritated by the lack of spider themed gear. Forget the generic titan/dwarf stuff, I just want to be covered in chitin.

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https://youtube.com/clip/UgkxtwxOXuNlbnApqXHTHmYrGgaVOybbxg1_?si=FUdcB05jVlH3I4pW

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thats going in the book

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Void elf eyes confuse me. Originally they were very, very bright blue, to the point of almost being white. Then BfA did the eye update for elves and the VElf default became an almost light greenish-blue instead.

Which isn’t typically associated with the Void - famously violet more often than not.

Yet now the Telogrus NPCs have eye colours in about as many variations as can be chosen in character creation. So do they just not have a “default canon” eye colour anymore?

men only want one thing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsZTolLYjbc

(the DS castlevania games were recently released on Steam - they are all excellent. I’m a huge fan of Portrait of Ruin especially)

do they have a n’zoth eye customisation option yet and if not why not

alternatively: c’thun eye stalks
alternatively alternatively: yogg-mouth eyes

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no

cowards are afraid to give any void related elf some actual body horror. void elves should have eyes in their hair. nzoth eyes. gangled claws and tentacles for fingers. we do not because of COWARDS

sadly if there is even the remote chance that a woman might not be conventionally attractive then the entire server farm will burst into flames, the void elves just catch the worst of it because we have seen what void-infused draenei look like and it’s INCREDIBLE give me that void jaw

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the goldshire coomers can speak for themselves. that abomination with half a venom-maw for a face and devil man crybaby breasts that would snap my arm off? wife material actually

We do also need more ‘void elves know things they Should Not’ moments

like you’re going about your day and suddenly your void elf companion says, “you need to go see your wife, it’s time” and refuses to elaborate

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