New novel excerpt SPOILER

Credits to Blizzard Watch. And the US pals that dug it out:

“What a pit,” Sira Moonwarden sneered, pulling her foot up out of the mud and listening to the resounding squelch. “A blessing that this post is only temporary.”

Beside her, Nathanos stood stalk still, ignoring the visible cloud of flies gathering around his head. He often wore a subtle cologne to ward off the scent of being neither living nor dead. Many found the complete absence of scent unnerving. Sira had only just grown accustomed to it herself. She did not handle the bugs as gracefully, batting at them while they gathered in ever thickening swarms.

“Where are they?” Sira added, annoyed. “Patience, Warden. Patience.”

She had little on a good day, even less when she was forced to stand knee-deep in rotting mud, the Frogmarsh a strangely painful reminder of how undead she truly was. Here, life roared at her from every direction, from the damp trees draped with green curtains of moss to the crabs clicking their way up and down the shore behind them, to the deafening chorus of frogs and insects robbing any chance of a peaceful thought.

Life. It was everywhere there. Brash, audacious life. It probably smelled green. Not an inch of it went uncovered in vines or nests or pond scum. Through the trees ahead, a herd of riverbeasts snorted and huffed, the brass section of the teeming band of chittering, birdsong, and ribbets.

It was, in a word, loathsome.

“We’ll be eaten alive,” she huffed, swatting a dozen bugs before all the words had left her mouth.

“There.” Nathanos pointed to the same trees that concealed the riverbeasts. Long, dripping strands of moss made the beach feel claustrophobic. The four dark rangers spread about to stand watch dutifully endured the stinging of bugs and stinking of the bog.

“Do you see them?” he asked. Sira squinted.

“They move like shadows along the forest floor, and being shadows they will continue being very useful to us.”

She marked movement among the tall roots jutting out from the base of the trees. Trolls cleverly smeared in mud crept toward them, nearly invisible in the jumble of bushes and fallen logs in the swamp. Sira would not argue about their usefulness—they had already had to move the Banshee’s Wail out of deep water to avoid the deadly storms raging along the coasts.

“They can come out of hiding,” she snapped. “They called for this meeting.”

“I happen to agree.” With a smirk, Nathanos whistled with his fingers in his mouth, alerting the Zandalari rebels that he had noticed their presence. They stood one by one, their leader among them, slowly making her way to their location with a pronounced limp. Sira somewhat liked the witch, Apari, for they had both been betrayed by the one thing that had always defined their lives.

For Sira, it was her worship of the goddess, Elune. For Apari, it was her loyalty to the Zandalari crown.

For the seriousness of her injury, Apari navigated the swamp deftly. They met in a clearing not far from the sands, the Widow’s Bite leader arriving with her bulbous tick pet on her shoulder, a small entourage of twelve or so guards, and her ever-present lieutenant, the tall, black-haired troll called Tayo.

Apari’s white hair had been streaked with mud to hide her identity. None of the trolls wore the distinctive white-and-black robes of the insurrection but rather nondescript rags and bits of armor.

Only Apari and her bodyguard Tayo broke away to speak with them. The troll witch leaned her weight onto her good leg and pressed her palm to her heart. “Greetings, pale rider.”

“At last,” Nathanos replied shortly. “I realize it must have been difficult, given your limitations, but next time I expect promptness.”

Her eyes flashed. “I’ve no limitations ya need worry about, pale rider.”

“Indeed. At least you have understood our need for secrecy. We cannot risk venturing further inland. If Zandalari loyalists lay eyes on us then our plans are forfeit.”

The witch waved away his words impatiently. “Have ya brought our payment?”

“You are hardly in a position to make demands.” Nathanos snorted. “But I am eager to be out of this swamp.”

He twisted at the hip and gestured Ranger Visrynn forward. The dark-haired ranger brought forward a small enameled chest, silently placing it on the neutral ground between the trolls and Blightcaller. Aboard the ship, Sira had seen them preparing the payment, a collection of gems, jewelry, beautifully hammered metal necklace plates, small flagons of rare spirits, and daggers. It struck Sira as slightly excessive given their dwindling resources, but Nathanos had made clear that this was the price of a successful mission.

“Soon,” he had assured her aboard the Banshee’s Wail not an hour earlier, “where we will be going none of these trifles will matter at all.”

Sira slapped at another swarm of insects buzzing around her head, watching as the witch’s bodyguard knelt and flicked open the chest with one finger. No smile. No thanks for their generosity. No reaction at all. Sira simmered, looking to Nathanos, who revealed as little as the black-haired troll.

“This is not what I want.” Apari shook her head, sneering. “This is not what we agreed upon.”

Clearing his throat, Nathanos calmly signaled for Visrynn to return. She did and with equal serenity picked up the chest and returned to her sisters behind them.

“Insulting,” Sira murmured. Perhaps she should not have. At once, the witch fixed her piercing turquoise eyes upon Sira. An instant later, Sira felt a sensation like a thousand spiders skittering down her back. She shivered but refused to tear her gaze away. Just a witch’s trick, she told herself, nothing more.

“Now, now,” Nathanos intervened. “This is a simple misunderstanding. What would you have from us instead?”

Apari grinned, showing a set of yellowed teeth sharpened to points, the ends blackened by the foul, strong spirits the Zandalari distilled in charred vats. She hobbled forward, looking Nathanos up and down as if he were a prize cut of meat. Whatever came next, Sira mused, would not make him happy.

“Your messenger said ya want to kill a loa.” Apari nodded. Her eyes lit up, the idea clearly exciting her. “You want to kill Bwonsamdi, but ya can’t, not without us. ’Tis no easy thing, what ya ask. He must be weakened first. Believers and tribute keep him strong, but without faithful followers he be vulnerable. His shrines be protected by powerful magic, the tribute I need from ya will dispel that magic.”

Nathanos hurried her along, at last reaching a state of visible impatience. “Go on.”

“It will require somethin’ precious,” she continued. Pointing to Visrynn and the chest, she flapped her hand and shrugged. “That might be precious to some, but not to you. Ya must give up somethin’ painful, somethin’ irreplaceable.”

“What we offer should be more than sufficient.” Nathanos stood firm. “You are not in a position to bargain.”

The witch was stunningly bold, Sira could give her that. With a theatrical sigh, the troll witch began to turn around, avoiding her bad leg and refusing help from her bodyguard as she began rounding up the members of the Widow’s Bite. For a moment, Sira remained certain it was just a bluff, but no, the trolls regrouped and slowly disappeared back into the dense foliage of the swamp.

“A moment.”

The trolls paused, looking to their leader. Apari waited, only offering a glance over her right shoulder. Before Nathanos could relent and submit to their demands, Sira took him by the elbow, lowering her voice and tilting her head toward him. “Wait . . .”

But he was already pulling a chain out from under his heavy black coat, a green-and-gold badge, warped and faded with time, hung from the tarnished necklace. An officer’s badge? A remnant from a war long since forgotten? Sira couldn’t say. Nathanos and Sylvanas had once served Silvermoon, he so tactically gifted that he had been raised to the rank of ranger lord in the Farstriders, an achievement no other human had managed. The Dark Lady herself had been the one to give the promotion, the dark rangers serving Sylvanas had told the tale many times at sea. It seemed to be a favorite. Was this the badge recognizing as much? Though his eyes always pulsed with the same steady crimson glow, Sira saw that dim for a moment, fading just like the old, etched memento. “What are you doing?” Sira whispered. “We cannot simply give in to every demand and roll over like trained dogs. They will think you weak.”

At that, Nathanos curled his lip, eyes now as hot and bright as his flaring rage. He seemed to collect himself, breathing hard. His strength, it seemed, was not to be questioned. Sira nearly recoiled, but he only pushed the hair back off his forehead, his gaze burning into her with the same furious intensity.

“You will learn the value of silence, or I will teach it to you.” That seemed to satisfy his fury, and when he looked at her again it was as if she were no more than a pustule on his foot, something he loathed to notice but must.

Sira stewed in indignant silence as he pulled at the chain around his neck, breaking it, before closing the gap between them and the troll witch, holding out the badge for her to take. Apari might have been severely injured, but she moved swiftly then, her arm but a blur as she tried to snatch the necklace from his palm. Nathanos, however, was ready for her, and quickly trapped her hand there before she could take the payment.

“This is no trinket, witch. If you fail to destroy the loa’s shrines as you have promised, then there will be severe consequences. You may have conjured a few clouds off the coast, but payment this dear demands results.”

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Honestly, this makes me like Sira as a Forsaken. Enjoyed the angle given to her character.

Also, this makes me lament even more how wasting they are with Nathanos character.
The way they portray the dude here, seems a ton more interesting than the character shown in the voicelines.

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Can’t agree on that one. I found him just as insufferable, to be honest.

On the excerpt itself. Erm… I pretty much have no feelings whatsoever.

Whoaa what a nice convenience there are Zandalari traitors to help undead humans for reasons! And apparently they are showing excitement over killing a Loa.

And I fail to see what makes Sira likeable to you? She had literally no ties to Silvermoon, Nathanos or Sylvanas before, why would she care about silly badge? Why would she advice him to not give up old possessions? Didn’t she herself gave up pretty much everything when she became undead? If anything it makes this character even more bizzare and disturbing.

I’d say that Nathanos is oddly tame in this bit. Usually he is the one who constantly brags and sheettalks.

Love the Dark Rangers repeating the story of how Nathanos became a Farstrider

I found it more interesting because his portrayal wasn’t about the usual and unnecessary snark and sass.
He was shown in a more focused and “professional” way, without some hyperbolic display.
As a good soldier with a plan, and committed to the goal.

The final touch about surrendering the last remnant of his former human life, as some payment or “ultimate sacrifice”, gave the character an additional touch I liked too.

The intro for the playable Zandalari already has Talanji dealing with a faction that wants her dead, and that despised Bwonsamdi profoundly.
Would be surprised if this didn’t relate to the whole White Widow incident.

Edit: And about Sira, I liked her portrayal here. That’s yet one step behind liking the character.
At least in this excerpt, her character goes a tad beyond the cheap one liners and being some basic automation that wails about the same stuff over and over.
Going by her Darkshore impersonation, it seemed that her transformation had turned her into some killer robot.

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We had a different experience then… every time i got a quest from him his voice dripped with sarcasm when he said “champion” and it seemed like he wanted to add “you’re useless maggot”…
To be honest that’s the only character trait i got from him snarky, sarcastic and annoying to the player.

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But for me, I’m starting to hate. Hope that we will kill her off.

That’s why I said that I liked his portrayal here. As it seems to go beyond that.

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I’m honestly conflicted, as I don’t know whether I want more internal monologues for Nathanos in the novel, or would rather they kept him as superficial as possible.
If they are going down the irredeemable villain route, rather they started distancing his character early on.

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Sure, I am biased here… but that’s not really how I read things like “I realize it must have been difficult, given your limitations, but next time I expect promptness.” ““You will learn the value of silence, or I will teach it to you.” That seemed to satisfy his fury,”. Seems like the same guy as always to me, just in a more professional setting, with people he needs more than the champion. I have no problem whatsoever imagining that guy going full hyperbolic Nathanos when back in safety and ordering minions around - or facing enemies in the open.

I guess I just felt that that topic was essentially over with Dark Mirror. Sacrificing his nephew seems a teeny bit more relevant as a gesture of shedding humanity to me than letting go of a memento.

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Well, given his latest portrayals, I fully expected him to talk down on both Apari and Sira, comment on their stink, or overall act contemptuously to their face.

I admit that again this is my personal opinion, but I can “tolerate” overall “jerkiness” if said character can act professionally if the situation demands it.

And I appreciate the pieces where writers refrain from creating clear cut cartoon villains out of characters.

In all, I could tolerate having a general like this. He acts as I imagined a Forsaken commander would.

I saw it more like a “last shred left” scenario.
In stories, those sort of scenarios are often shown by using something that in appearance seem insignificant but still holds great emotional value to the protagonist.

And well…killing a cousin bent on exterminating you because he now sees you as an abomination, kinda removes a big chunk of the emotional weight.

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Its sad that Nathanos and Sira have no chance of surviving :frowning:
They`ll be allowed to go under the knife to advance the plot.

Nathanos will survive no doubt. But Sira is dead meat sadly.

I`m not sure but i hope so. I wish you were right at the end of the Shadowlands.

His team controls the respawn point in the Maw. He doesn’t have to survive to survive.

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What I liked is that this excerpt implies that Zandalari controls Majority of Nazmir now, to the point both Nathanos and the traitors has to hide in the far away borders.

And that the traitors aren’t numerous but still both Nate and Sira couldn’t boss around them, but were afraid of Talanji and her loyalists. It means she has strong authority among her people.

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Don’t know about that.
If I hadn’t seen the datamined bits, I’d probably feel that both would survive.
But as of now…I think both have a whole lot of red flags pinned to their back.

Regardless of how I want it to be the case, assuming such is reaching.
And I doubt Nathanos or Sira were afraid of neither Talanji nor Apari.
With the former they simply didn’t want to risk their covert mission, and with the latter, it felt as if he was barely tolerating her presence out of need for his goals. You don’t threaten verbally and physically someone that frightens you.

Thankfully we will know for sure very soon. But the fact that traitors had to stip themselves to rags to camuflage themselves better, and that they were hiding on the backcorner of frogmarsh out of fear of being found by loyalists means that Talanji is very serious on regaining control.

And obviously props to Talanji on that.

I meant that Nate and Sira couldn’t boss the Zandalari traitors around, they had to do their bidding and Nate couldn’t even be usual sleezy snarky himself in front of them but agree on their terms simply because they are his only chance on success with the mission.

And Sira’s case is even more hilarious. Usually she was barking out loud, and here she was only barking under her nose xD and quickly got unpleasant response that her behavior won’t be tolerated.

I believe that one of them has to die. And it appears it will be Sira. So I’ll keep fingers crossed for that. :crossed_fingers:

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It is good to know that the Zandalari starting to control the majority of Zandalar(the continent) again. Just as it should be. I like for the right trolls to be shown strong and competent.

Hey there Zakkaru, old pal! I’ll give you 30 silver if you kill Gonk for me! What ya say, mon?

I’ll take 30 silver and put you back to grave. :wink:

That would be my kind of plot twist.